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Though it is seen from everywhere,
Eternally longing for a touch,
Though it’s heart seems clear and bare,
Even at horizon there’s no one to clutch.
For the twilight and the dawn,
For the rainbow and the flare,
Just a canvas with things drawn,
Of fillingness it’s just a snare.
A simile for success,
A symbol for boundlessness,
Always watched for egress,
But never able to express.
Every moment a star falls,
The clouds conceal it’s face,
The thunder suppresses it’s calls,
The birds are too busy in their race.
Clouds drift with no bars,
And a hundred merry birds fly,
Amidst those thousand shining stars,
Is the lonely sky.
good one.. can you try rewriting it impersonating the sky?
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Thanks keviv !I had the same thought in my mind about the impersonation. But I chucked that idea because I am inclined to keep things a bit abstract,yet,depictive ! Had I impersonated the sky,I would have lost the apparent effect – a lonely person using sky as a medium to express himself.But yes,I appreciate your view too !!!
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